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To me day is night,
to you night is day.
From each other we are out of sight,
but this I wish to say:

You in my arms I want to hold,
and together withness the raising sun.
Your more valuable and precios then gold,
and for the days to come we will share our fun.

I wish that you marry me,
forever yours I truly wish to be.
©2004-2009 ~Asmondai
:iconasmondai:

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To me day is night,
to you night is day.
From each other we are out of sight,
but this I wish to say:

You in my arms I want to hold,
and together withness the raising sun.
Your more valuable and precios then gold,
and for the days to come we will share our fun.

I wish that you marry me,
forever yours I truly wish to be.

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:iconawfuhr:
truely beautiful. Its great that you found someone. I feel the same way about somebody only we have to be hundreds of miles apart right now. I kind of envy this poem and the writer.
:iconasmondai:
I thank you for the kind words and I´m sorry to hear such sorrow on you.:cries:
You don´t need to envy the poem...nor me sir, for I have no one to love yet.:raincloud:
But I have hopes on it and I wish you luck, I´m sure you 2 will meet eachother again and be as one.:boogie:

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:iconawfuhr:
I'm sure me and her will be fine. We are pretty strong. You have no one to love yet; 'yet' is the key word. Everyone usually will find someone. granted everyone gets some pretty shitty ones, but it will come. Hey you can't find someone just bottom out in some hardcore drugs (just kidding).
:iconasmondai:
True.
But as I said, I have high hopes for it. :pray:

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